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their bleach skin caught my eye
albino white against the wild
hair like bright sky electric in the briars

haloed sister gods shot down like fawn
bang
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UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013   Writer
holy shit.
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
haha thank you
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The use of language is very effective in this - it almost crackles!
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
thank you, I think I can hear it too
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disrhythmic Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Hi. :wave: I'm a reader for #Elocutionists and I read this out loud. I'd love to put it up on our blog ([link]), if that's alright with you. You can listen to my reading here: [link] :heart:

Let me know if you like it. <3 I loved reading it.
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012   General Artist
Congratulations on the well-deserved DLD, lovely! :huggle:
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
thank you :] I was very surprised
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Sammur-amat Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012   General Artist
Well like I said, it is well-deserved:heart:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by DailyLitDeviations in a news article that can be found here [link]
Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article.
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oooh I like the concept.
great imagery. eerie.
with the sparseness and the wilderness
it brought to mind bon iver
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