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Words by drawing-in-the-dark

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It's a stabbing sight
Letting in the morning with a crack of the shades
And you forget you could page-turn horizons
Waft through free territory
Where acres are just beds
Made of fresh land

Wrinkles in the river
Tell remembered times
About old languages that could make you cry
About soft beds that carve away canyons
A speaking voice lifted from the earth
Begging you to remember
bed
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Given 2012-11-07
bed by *anotherforestfire ( Suggested by Mrs-Freestar-Bul and Featured by thorns )
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Meggie272 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oooh, I love this. It's deep and mysterious but gentle and soft and it makes me think.
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
thank you!
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I was so happy to see you could get such recognition! You probably don't remember me, and that is fine. However I cannot help myself when I see wonderful talent (to which I've had the privilege of coming into contact with before); I grow extremely excited! Finally recognition is being given to your beautiful writing, and what a piece this poem turned out to be! Your word choice is superb; the imagery shifts flowingly into place, with the same fluency of your sentences! Your metaphors really bring this to life, along with the emotion hidden behind text and stanza. I just found the read beautiful, for the concept was strong and took strong root within my heart!

Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece, and I'm so happy for you! So.... :megaphone:Congrats on the Daily Deviation! :megaphone:
In my opinion, it was much deserved! :D
(I apologize for being a day late: I couldn't post this any sooner. Congratulations to you all the same!)
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
I do remember you! thank you so much, I don't know what to say, I'm not used to so much positivity about my writing...it is very much appreciated
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brassteeth Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Well Done. Congratulations on your D.D!
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
thank you!
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FaerieChozen Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
beautiful
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
thanks :]
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the-kings-pawn Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i am painting this above my bed
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dy-ad Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
haha go right ahead
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