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(Contains: sexual themes)
Skin smeared in sheets
Caught like your lip in my teeth
We fumble through thickets and find the wood floor
Where the rhythm pummels my unlocked door

If a mouth is a kiss
My body is a church
Let my spine be the arch that leads from heaven to earth

A worm through the peach, I find you in me
Coiling like rivers flooding the sea
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Churchby dy-ad

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for a contest~

I won! [link]
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AGMeade Jan 23, 2013  Professional Writer
This is absolutely beautiful. It's incredibly sexy, of course, but I was more caught by the slight thread of unease in the last stanza. Congrats on your DLD!
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:icondy-ad:
thank you so much!
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:iconxlntwtch:
:iconcongratssignplz: on the DLD "Pick of the Day"! This is a piece that demands a few readings, plus I read it aloud. I'm glad you won the contest and love the metaphors and similies here. Thank you
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:icondy-ad:
thanks so much!
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Hfeather53 Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
those last two lines are such a perfect ending! congratulations on the well deserved DLD!
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:icondy-ad:
thank you very much!
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:icondailylitdeviations:
Your wonderful literary work has been chosen to be featured by =DailyLitDeviations and has been selected as our "Pick of the Day". It is featured in a news article here: [link] and on our main page.

Be sure to check out the other artists featured and show your support by :+fav:ing the News Article. Keep writing and keep creating.
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